Mr Green's secret

Written by Sven J.

It is a wonderful day. The sun is shining and Jack gets up. His mum shouts: 'Ja-ack, breakfast is ready.' Jack goes downstairs and into the kitchen. 'Where's the breakfast for Mr. Green?', he asks his mum. 'Jack,you know it. Mr.Green isn't here. He's away.' 'Oh, right. Where is he?',he asks. 'I don't know, but he comes back in the evening.' 'Before he comes, I look in his room', Jack thinks. After breakfast Jack goes downstairs and looks at one of the nine doors, to an old grey number three. 'Mr. Green's room, good. 'He looks left and right: nobody. Then he opens the door. Unfortunately Mr.Green didm't leave the key in the door, so Jack can't lock it. He turns around and sees a mysterious box in the corner of the room. The second member of the SHoCK team goes over there and opens it. Inside are the black clothes: A pair of trousers, a sweatshirt , dark shoes and black gloves. 'He is the black visitor', Jack says and looks to another box. He opens it too and finds many newspapers. On the first somebody took a note: On Saturday at the Parrot-Street. 20.30!!! , Jack reads and knows what he has to do now.

First he runs in the garden and takes out his skateboard from the basement. Then he skates to Sophie. With her he goes to Jo and Dan. Last they meet Ananda. Jack tells his friends about the note and Jo says: 'It all fits. We have to go to the airport at 8 pm."

So at 8 o'clock the SHoCK team is at the airport behind a box. 'Look,there is he, there´s Mr. Green.' They all turn to Ananda and see him. Then Jack stands up and follows Mr. Green. His friends run after him and see that Mr. Green goes into Parrot-Street. Then he puts many boxes next to him and there's a door. He says a word and the door opens. When he is in the house the door closes. Suddenly they hear a voice: 'Pretty Polly, pretty Polly.' Jack looks to the sky and shouts: 'Polly, what are you doing here?' No answer. 'Mad bird!', he says and asks: 'Does anyone know what he said before the secret door opened?' 'I don´t know', all answered. 'Pretty Polly.' 'Yes, pretty Polly. Let's try to open the door with this.'

They go to the mystery door and say: 'Pretty Polly!' And really the door opens. The SHoCK team goes in and they hear voices: 'I said that to the Queen.' 'And, what did she say?' There are two persons. 'She is scared about the robbers under the Pretty Polly B&B. 'What?', Jack shouts. 'There is somebody!' The man comes and says: 'In the room there immediatetly.' The SHoCK team goes in the room.

Mr. Green looks and says: 'You are the detectives. Good to meet you. I tell you the whole story: We are spies of the Queen. Under your B&B Jack, there are bankrobbers. They want to go into the Queens treasure room. We have to take them behind bars. So we all have to fly to London.'

After four hours they are all in London. At night, there is a noise in front of the treasure rooms´ window. 'The robbers', Mr. Green says. When they are in the room, Mr. Green takes out a gun. The men are scared of him and run away, but the police is there. The men are behind bars. 'Another case is solved by the SHoCK team!!!'

Sven J, class5e